| Deviant Login | Shop | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
 TRANSIENCEby *grohsARTigComments First of all thank you very much for taking time!
 And of course no! I'm very grateful for any critiques and advices! Need these to get better With the light. The light from the right side comes from the right side yea, but more from behind her. So that the face havn't light on this side, therefore I make this part darker. But your are right, the light is not perfect as it should   next time I will make it better! Thanks for the advice! So I really appreciate your feedback and now I'll make it better on my actual work  regards! |
Sta.sh
The only thing I've noticed that you probably didnt consider well enough, is the light sources reflecting on the face/hair.
on the face its clearly coming from the left, on the body its from both sides.
On the hair (the part covering the face) is kind of all together which is kinda wrong if you were going for realistic lighting.
The 3 left hair cluster reflect as if the light is from the right, and the other side is mirrored, that's kinda wrong I guess.. and theres a white underglow beneath one hair cluster which looks kinda weird..
Other than that, It's an amazing work!
very good!
keep it up!
I hope I did not offend you with this critique, I mean only to help you